OMG I am in love with this! I love how each character has the perfect expressions to match their dialogue...so far I've only done Faust's route and it's great. I love how there are certain dynamics between the characters as smaller groups rather than having everyone acting strangely similar. Not gonna say specifics 'cause I might ramble lmao...Keep up the great work!
Thank you very much, and sorry for the delayed reply! It's been some crazy days, hah. We're still working on this as time goes on, so we hope you enjoy what's to come!
I just finished the demo and oh my god, I'm impressed. Not only is the art style really cute, the writing is great as well. It feels so natural to read and you can imagine everything. And my favorite point, the choice with whom to go. You have to really think about it because you don't want to turn someone down. I really like all the characters and are looking forward to see more of them. Especially cause there is more to it, secrets to discover, maybe even trauma to overcome together. Really, really good work on that. Oh yeah and what I like as well is the protagonists habit to compare situations to music. Feeling the mood though music in his head is impressive
Ah, thank you very much! We're really glad to hear you're enjoying the game so far. We'll make sure to deliver more with time!
It's good that you pay attention to their dialogue and their reactions, the narrator might not notice some things, but everyone has their reasons to react to things one way or another. You'll discover them as the game continues~
Because this is your first build I wanted to give you some solid feedback (or share my feelings at the very least), but mostly I just wanted to share how much I enjoyed playing Cor! :)
The opening was unique and it grabbed my attention right away. The dialogue flows easily and each character seems to have their own voice which is FANTASTIC.
So far the game has a lighter tone and it's really easy to pick up and enjoy. There wasn't a huge infodump at the begining. Thankyou!
The sprites are cute and expressive. I really liked that you've included the main character sprite, i always love it when VN's include the MC. (Though initially I was a little confused as to who it was... It would require extra work but perhaps you could include a frame of them staring at their own reflection to introduce the player to the MC's sprite.) Faust and Hector are especially cute.
It might be a good idea to include some 3/4 turned character sprites during group conversations? When everyone is facing forward it can be a little monotonous, but the art style here is super cute, and character expressions change frequently so it's not a huge issue. :)
The soundtrack is definitely not your conventional generic piano VN soundtrack and it works really well! Sound often feels like an afterthought in a lot of games and it works to both set the mood and keep each scene feeling different enough from the last.
While the dialogue is great, I would consider maybe breaking up the longer sentences into separate lines? Or at the very least do so on the mobile builds.
Thank you very much for taking your time to share your thoughts like this! It's really apreciated, and we're really glad you enjoyed the experience so far~
We're planning to add more sprites as the build goes, including more 3/4 turned character sprites, so we hope that'll be more covered as we continue.
The lines being too long was something we needed to know, whether people would prefer longer, but fewer "clicks", or shorter lines with more text as a result. Thanks for letting us know about it!
As for where is Cor set, all we can say so far is that it's not based on our world. This won't have big implications in Cor, but it will be explained in due time~
Again, thanks for this, and we hope you enjoy the next builds aswell!
Very interesting so far, can't wait to see more and hope this project turns out successful! Also you should link your patreon on this page so that it will be visible to everyone.
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This game is so dawn good, when the next update is comming out???
Thank you very much! We're really glad you like it~
Ideally, next update should be ready by the end of November/beginning of December. We'll post a Devlog soon explaining how are things going!
Imma give this one a try!
I find it funny how all their tails are raised :P
Finally. The secret is out. I can finally mention that detail now that someone finally said it~
:D
Holy cow I love this visual novel a lot!! I just finished Mike's route and now I can't wait to play Gus' route!
Amazing job! Keep it up!
Thank you very much! We're really glad to hear that~ We hope you enjoy it just as much!
Everyone is so nice that I dont know which route to pick first!
Yaaaay
Great game! Can't wait to see more updates <3
Thank you very much! They'll come soon but for sure, hope you keep enjoying them!
OMG I am in love with this! I love how each character has the perfect expressions to match their dialogue...so far I've only done Faust's route and it's great. I love how there are certain dynamics between the characters as smaller groups rather than having everyone acting strangely similar. Not gonna say specifics 'cause I might ramble lmao...Keep up the great work!
Thank you very much! We're very glad you enjoyed their dynamic, it's one of the aspects we want to focus the most. Hope you enjoy the next updates!
Please continue I love your work :)
Thank you very much, and sorry for the delayed reply! It's been some crazy days, hah. We're still working on this as time goes on, so we hope you enjoy what's to come!
I just finished the demo and oh my god, I'm impressed. Not only is the art style really cute, the writing is great as well. It feels so natural to read and you can imagine everything.
And my favorite point, the choice with whom to go. You have to really think about it because you don't want to turn someone down. I really like all the characters and are looking forward to see more of them.
Especially cause there is more to it, secrets to discover, maybe even trauma to overcome together.
Really, really good work on that.
Oh yeah and what I like as well is the protagonists habit to compare situations to music. Feeling the mood though music in his head is impressive
Ah, thank you very much! We're really glad to hear you're enjoying the game so far. We'll make sure to deliver more with time!
It's good that you pay attention to their dialogue and their reactions, the narrator might not notice some things, but everyone has their reasons to react to things one way or another. You'll discover them as the game continues~
Because this is your first build I wanted to give you some solid feedback (or share my feelings at the very least), but mostly I just wanted to share how much I enjoyed playing Cor! :)
The opening was unique and it grabbed my attention right away. The dialogue flows easily and each character seems to have their own voice which is FANTASTIC.
So far the game has a lighter tone and it's really easy to pick up and enjoy. There wasn't a huge infodump at the begining. Thankyou!
The sprites are cute and expressive. I really liked that you've included the main character sprite, i always love it when VN's include the MC. (Though initially I was a little confused as to who it was... It would require extra work but perhaps you could include a frame of them staring at their own reflection to introduce the player to the MC's sprite.) Faust and Hector are especially cute.
It might be a good idea to include some 3/4 turned character sprites during group conversations? When everyone is facing forward it can be a little monotonous, but the art style here is super cute, and character expressions change frequently so it's not a huge issue. :)
The soundtrack is definitely not your conventional generic piano VN soundtrack and it works really well! Sound often feels like an afterthought in a lot of games and it works to both set the mood and keep each scene feeling different enough from the last.
While the dialogue is great, I would consider maybe breaking up the longer sentences into separate lines? Or at the very least do so on the mobile builds.
Whereabout is Cor set? (Europe? Americas?)
Definitely looking forward to the next build!
Thank you very much for taking your time to share your thoughts like this! It's really apreciated, and we're really glad you enjoyed the experience so far~
We're planning to add more sprites as the build goes, including more 3/4 turned character sprites, so we hope that'll be more covered as we continue.
The lines being too long was something we needed to know, whether people would prefer longer, but fewer "clicks", or shorter lines with more text as a result. Thanks for letting us know about it!
As for where is Cor set, all we can say so far is that it's not based on our world. This won't have big implications in Cor, but it will be explained in due time~
Again, thanks for this, and we hope you enjoy the next builds aswell!
Very interesting so far, can't wait to see more and hope this project turns out successful! Also you should link your patreon on this page so that it will be visible to everyone.
Thank you very much! And you're right, we fixed that just now. Thanks for letting us know!
really good VN art is cool with good emotion and the story is great. please continue in what are you doing.
Thank you very much!! We will make sure to have more as soon as we can~ Glad to hear you enjoyed it!